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4198510 No.4198510 [Reply] [Original]

Pen on paper
I make these while I'm in class
please critique

>> No.4198513

You can't be serious.

>> No.4198520
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4198520

>>4198510

>> No.4198525
Quoted By: >>4198753

the classmate next to you who gives compliments is just making sure that you wont shoot them when the time comes

>> No.4198528

>>4198510
not even /beg/ worthy
get off 4chan and pay attention to your lectures, you reek of underage

>> No.4198535

HAHAHAHA, oh wow

>> No.4198725
Quoted By: >>4199650

Underage-stoner-core

>> No.4198753

>>4198525
This

>> No.4198841

>>4198510
I love it.

>> No.4199222
Quoted By: >>4199766

>>4198510
Post more anon

>> No.4199231

Actaully really cool, has a a sort of balance to it even though its asymmetric.

>> No.4199297
Quoted By: >>4199596

>>4198510
Don't know why this is getting so much hate, it looks pretty cool and unique.

>> No.4199510

>>4198510
I call it Bold and Brash

>> No.4199588
Quoted By: >>4199763

>>4198510
What am I look at other than blue ink on lined paper?

>> No.4199596
Quoted By: >>4199604

>>4199297
because literally everyone has done this shit

>> No.4199604
Quoted By: >>4199627

>>4199596
This time the word "literally" is actually fitting. I bet most people that don't even draw have done this.

>> No.4199605
Quoted By: >>4199630

The second one is interesting. They’re doodles though, there isn’t really much to critique.

If you’re asking how to improve, read the stickied post, and put some time into learning the fundamentals.

>> No.4199627

>>4199604
so what?

>> No.4199630
Quoted By: >>4199641

>>4199605
If he's an abstract artist then reading Loomis won't help much. The sticky fundamentals are aimed at figurative artists who want to draw humans (most people here), not abstract/conceptual artists.

>> No.4199641

>>4199630
The second image is an abstracted figure. OP improving their drawing skills would result in a better finished piece. Your goal doesn’t have to be hyper-realism to focus on the fundamentals.

>> No.4199650

>>4198725
this is something i would make when high at school when 16.
anyway i'm high right now and even something simple like OP drawing seems like a masterpiece.

>> No.4199763

>>4199588
on a classical painting, what are you looking at other than pigment on a canvas?
think about that high quality reply you made or zoom in you low Res fuck

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>>4199222
a little different, since I tried working with different coloured pens here



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